Writing strong product descriptions is harder than it seems.
Of course, as Creative director Pat Gallagher once said, "Anyone can state facts about a product, and maybe even state them clearly."
But if your product description is just a boring list of facts, your product will be boring, too. And boring doesn't sell.
A simple, lil process I use for writing a product description that’s rewarding to read:
1. When someone uses my product HOW is it going to make that person feel?
Write down a list of positive feelings.
√ Examples: Calm. Refreshed. Rejuvenated. Safe. Daring. Free. Proud. Grateful. Optimistic. Lucky.
2. Imagine your brand as a real person. What’s your brand’s voice? In other words, how does it sound in people's heads?
√ See my client Hashtag Monday’s voice for example. It’s witty but approachable. It’s direct but helpful. It’s quirky but human. It’s conservational but professional.
3. Write down a list with all the cold, specific, hard, product facts your copy must communicate.
See my client Anytongs for example. Anytongs is a little magic gadget that turns ordinary spoons and forks into legendary kitchen tongs. Some of its product facts:
√ Dishwasher safe.
√ Durable.
√ Heat resistant.
√ Transforms almost any two pieces of flatware into tongs.
4. Write down a list with common objections that are stopping people from buying your product.
Write them as What if questions like:
-What if they send me cheap crap from Ali Express?
-What if this website isn't legit and I'm just being scammed by some random dude in Russia?
- What if my package gets lost between somewhere and nowhere?
- What if I can get a cheaper alternative somewhere else?
- What if it doesn’t work and do what it says?
Next, follow these 4 steps and start writing your product description. But first you need a good structure. And to illustrate what I mean, here’s a glorious example from Monster Supplies (I wish I was the copywriter who wrote it):