It's true. Your {state what you’re selling} is made from {little known (BUT weird/fun/interesting/shocking)product fact that makes your product remarkable}


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After


1. Attention grabber ⇝  “It’s true.”

2. Clarify what you’re selling ⇝ “your pair of Lane Eight shoes”

3. State specific proof point that shows why your product is remarkable⇝ “is made from 11 recycled plastic bottles.”